Friday 5 December 2014

Learning Blog (December 5th, 2014)

What we did in class today?

-we looked at how to do a proper paragraph
-we handed in our self assesment 
-we learn how to do an outline.

Why did we do it?

- we learned about how to write a paragraph properly beacause it can help us improve our writing skills in the near future.
-to boost our grades, not only to our class, but to our different subject too. 
-to practice our paragraph writing skills.
-to learn different ways to write a paragraph. 

-we handed our self assesment to Ms Lees because we need to show our progress for the last months.
-to see if we're doing great so far. 
-for Ms Lees to know if we're honest about our opinion.
-to let our parents know that we're responsible for our work in school.

-we learn how to do an outline beacause we need to add another skill in order to improve our writing skills.
-to challenge ourself in order to improve our grades.
-to see if we can do the outline on our own.

Whats for homework?

-dialectucal journal (mon)
-outlines (tues)
-innovation proposal (tues)

2 comments:

  1. Hello, what I really liked about your post of the Learning blog is that you gave out many descriptive things on what we did and class, how we did it, etc. You are missing a bit of criteria on what to write in the learning blog. Here's a link to the criteria needed, --> http://leeshum8.blogspot.ca/2014/12/criteria-for-learning-blogs.html
    Our lovely Alex provided us with the criteria. What I think would be better is if you bold out your important letters, for example your heading.
    Overall, it helped a lot. Thanks~

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  2. I really like how you use point form to show what we did, why and what we learned. In the future, you may want to highlight the key words and points. Overall, it's a great post !

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